I’m sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts… It was a little long winded, but the sex scenes and the details through out the s tory were great. Indian hot sex You have talent.READERReport 2008-02-16 23:00:39I hate people who dis others for what they think is “poor writing.” I loved the story. like v said about it.«12» Keep up your writing because you have better grammar than most people on here.READERReport 2006-09-22 19:40:57the sex scene is like last and all of the first part is shitREADERReport 2006-04-22 18:15:04I’d prefer to see something that wasnt erotica from you. Unfortunately, I didn’t really want to make it sexual so I stopped after I figured it out. Keep up your writing because you have better grammar than most people on here.READERReport 2006-09-22 19:40:57the sex scene is like last and all of the first part is shitREADERReport 2006-04-22 18:15:04I’d prefer to see something that wasnt erotica from you. It was a little long winded, but the sex scenes and the details through out the s tory were great. I’m sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts… Unfortunately, I didn’t really want to make it sexual so I stopped after I figured it out. Kudos for using the show though!Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-23 20:54:51It wasn’t that bad.
