Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? Indian porn sex dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! This became confusing after awhile. SHIT. The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view. This became confusing after awhile. My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story. Keep writing!«12» 8 s«12»Report 2016-06-23 02:27:44this. SHIT. The second problem was that it became repetitive. is. There was no change is style between the different characters. SHIT. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! Please stop writing and find another hobby.
