6 comments«12»westmich69Report 2019-03-04 19:14:31Off to a good startliz33ndReport 2016-10-22 18:43:50good but needs a editor loving the ideaAnonymous readerReport 2015-11-12 03:25:14you need to include paragraph breaksAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-05 01:43:33just a simple query,, tim is tied down so how could he put his arms around his lover? just a minor point but think about what you are writing, apart from that a good storyanonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 07:40:36The spacing hurts my eyes«12» 6 comments«12»westmich69Report 2019-03-04 19:14:31Off to a good startliz33ndReport 2016-10-22 18:43:50good but needs a editor loving the ideaAnonymous readerReport 2015-11-12 03:25:14you need to include paragraph breaksAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-05 01:43:33just a simple query,, tim is tied down so how could he put his arms around his lover? Indian Sex 6 comments«12»westmich69Report 2019-03-04 19:14:31Off to a good startliz33ndReport 2016-10-22 18:43:50good but needs a editor loving the ideaAnonymous readerReport 2015-11-12 03:25:14you need to include paragraph breaksAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-05 01:43:33just a simple query,, tim is tied down so how could he put his arms around his lover? just a minor point but think about what you are writing, apart from that a good storyanonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 07:40:36The spacing hurts my eyes«12»