9 comments«12»READERReport 2006-05-25 02:09:38Purity you’re a moron. You could abbreviate any story by just writing the title. Indian hot sex what’s ‘knickers’ anyway?READERReport 2006-01-18 18:49:52purity dum ass u write a lot for no reason don’t complain they did the best they could, 10/10 on my list, so read it and don’t complainREADERReport 2005-06-05 12:27:44pretty good but you could have gone into more detail with the sex. Great story.«12» You said it. You could abbreviate any story by just writing the title. “i sucked his cock to get it wet, pulled my knickers off and rode him” isn’t poetic. melodramatic writing brings the reader into the story and sets a mood. what’s ‘knickers’ anyway?READERReport 2006-01-18 18:49:52purity dum ass u write a lot for no reason don’t complain they did the best they could, 10/10 on my list, so read it and don’t complainREADERReport 2005-06-05 12:27:44pretty good but you could have gone into more detail with the sex. You could abbreviate any story by just writing the title.
