But in the future, try to be careful about confusing things like names…bad spelling and grammar I can forgive, but a sudden name change has me wondering what I missed or if this was just some cobbled up cut-n-paste effort plagiarized from another site. The only serious complaint I really have is Andy introduces himself as ‘Anthony Carpenter’, but at the end, Emily calls him Mr. Indian Sex Video Now, I don’t know how much Emily knows of her apparent future brother-in-law, so this can probably be passed off as an unknowing girl trying to be formal with his nickname. So I say keep up tha good stories!«12345» 61 comments«12345»X-MAN215Report 2021-01-16 04:09:47THX LUV ITAnonymous readerReport 2016-08-06 18:18:49Great story!!!Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-14 04:14:29I find there are issues with spelling, grammar and word choice. …but not enough to fret over, just would suggest having a proofreader/editor for your future efforts… Now, I don’t know how much Emily knows of her apparent future brother-in-law, so this can probably be passed off as an unknowing girl trying to be formal with his nickname. The only serious complaint I really have is Andy introduces himself as ‘Anthony Carpenter’, but at the end, Emily calls him Mr.
