This MS had no trouble reading it.READERReport 2007-01-03 19:47:27ok everyone…the point of this story is to be written in the way its written…im not gonna change it into paragraphs, that would destroy the point of it being a REAL roleplay lolREADERReport 2007-01-03 13:37:35it 2 hard to follow like that need to rewrite in to paraghesREADERReport 2007-01-03 12:14:42Very tough to read. Indian Sex This MS had no trouble reading it.READERReport 2007-01-03 19:47:27ok everyone…the point of this story is to be written in the way its written…im not gonna change it into paragraphs, that would destroy the point of it being a REAL roleplay lolREADERReport 2007-01-03 13:37:35it 2 hard to follow like that need to rewrite in to paraghesREADERReport 2007-01-03 12:14:42Very tough to read. it doesn’t have a flow because of the ‘scrpt’ type of writing. This MS had no trouble reading it.READERReport 2007-01-03 19:47:27ok everyone…the point of this story is to be written in the way its written…im not gonna change it into paragraphs, that would destroy the point of it being a REAL roleplay lolREADERReport 2007-01-03 13:37:35it 2 hard to follow like that need to rewrite in to paraghesREADERReport 2007-01-03 12:14:42Very tough to read.
