Please follow up with another story. Indian Sex Thanks.«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 13:05:29Well. … I note that the commenter didn’t refer us to any works of his/her own. Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! grammar was atrocious. This needs a lot of work before it is readable.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 01:05:57Hmmm… Second, please don’t leave us wondering what the two girls in the bathroom were up to. Thanks.«1» Ignore jerk comments. Please follow up with another story. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! I have two suggestions. Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part. grammar was atrocious. Words were very strange, like using “defiant” instead of “definite” over and over implying it’s not merely a spelling error but some confusion on your part.
