i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. Indian Sex i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? Grammar is still shit. too many grammar mistakes for my taste. i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. too many grammar mistakes for my taste. Grammar is still shit. I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? you don’t have very many mistakes at all! you don’t have very many mistakes at all! too many grammar mistakes for my taste. Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? 8 s«12»Report 2008-08-23 21:35:41Well its way better than the other ones. Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions?
