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5/10.READERReport 2006-08-13 08:14:50yep, plot is good rendition needs polishing,perhaps you might like to get someone to edit your next one to make the story easier to read, give you 9 for effort.READERReport 2006-07-18 15:46:17I think your introductory story is kind of “Good” to be honest with you; aside from a few grammatical flaws it is “Good”. After all you are telling a story, and the readers who criticize your writing skills aren’t very skillful at reading between the lines. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-25 23:56:251/10 i didnt even get semi hard im still soft bro work on thatAnonymous readerReport 2008-11-18 21:34:47Good storyREADERReport 2007-04-01 21:07:53Too short. After all you are telling a story, and the readers who criticize your writing skills aren’t very skillful at reading between the lines. dw«12» 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-25 23:56:251/10 i didnt even get semi hard im still soft bro work on thatAnonymous readerReport 2008-11-18 21:34:47Good storyREADERReport 2007-04-01 21:07:53Too short. I encourage you to continue with your story and not let others deter you. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-25 23:56:251/10 i didnt even get semi hard im still soft bro work on thatAnonymous readerReport 2008-11-18 21:34:47Good storyREADERReport 2007-04-01 21:07:53Too short. After all you are telling a story, and the readers who criticize your writing skills aren’t very skillful at reading between the lines. dw«12»




















