The writing was fantastic though.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 16:00:02Good story, wrong couple.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 13:29:55to be honest the imperious curse is popular in the fan fiction and it isn’t impossible for people to have the same idea is it? Indian hot sex It had to be with Ron. After all writers borrow ideas from each other all the time, even Rowling.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 15:44:34Since Hermione is not a virgin in this story, can you write a story of her first time? The imperious curse(even a fake one) is very overused and also I happened to read a lot of similar stories with the exact same scenario. Pleaseeeeee!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 06:57:06If you changed Harry with Draco or someone evil would be better for this kind of story. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-28 11:12:35The only reason I’m giving you a negative vote is because you didn’t go for something original. The writing was fantastic though.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 16:00:02Good story, wrong couple.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 13:29:55to be honest the imperious curse is popular in the fan fiction and it isn’t impossible for people to have the same idea is it? 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-28 11:12:35The only reason I’m giving you a negative vote is because you didn’t go for something original.
