HOW OLD ARE THEY? delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. Indian hot sex WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very good start but keep this story going.«123» HOW OLD ARE THEY? WHO ARE THEY? where is the background and character development? this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-18 20:18:34THE BEST THING YOU CAN DO IS DELETE IT AND START OVER FROM THE BEGINNING. WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. DO THEY KEEP FUCKING OR WAS IT A ONE TIME THING? AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very good start but keep this story going.«123»
