The writing was fantastic though.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 16:00:02Good story, wrong couple.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-26 13:29:55to be honest the imperious curse is popular in the fan fiction and it isn’t impossible for people to have the same idea is it? Indian Sex Video Pleaseeeeee!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 06:57:06If you changed Harry with Draco or someone evil would be better for this kind of story. And yes there is a same story with Ginny and Hermione in this site.«12» It had to be with Ron. Pleaseeeeee!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 06:57:06If you changed Harry with Draco or someone evil would be better for this kind of story. After all writers borrow ideas from each other all the time, even Rowling.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 15:44:34Since Hermione is not a virgin in this story, can you write a story of her first time? 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-28 11:12:35The only reason I’m giving you a negative vote is because you didn’t go for something original. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-28 11:12:35The only reason I’m giving you a negative vote is because you didn’t go for something original. It had to be with Ron. Pleaseeeeee!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-25 06:57:06If you changed Harry with Draco or someone evil would be better for this kind of story.
