Grammar? Spelling? Indian Sex Spelling? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Spelling? However the story was just a bit weak. …I have to agree with the first poster. . … But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Work on all three and your story tellin will be better.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 08:26:21just shut up and let em fuck«12» Work on all three and your story tellin will be better.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 08:26:21just shut up and let em fuck«12» Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too. Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. Grammar? Grammar? However the story was just a bit weak. …I have to agree with the first poster. . … Grammar? Grammar? Work on all three and your story tellin will be better.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 08:26:21just shut up and let em fuck«12»
